Critiques for "Final Sunset pencils Page 34"

The little boy in the second to last panel needs to be a bit chunkier. kids get baby fat that stays for awhile, he might look more like a child if you fattened him up a bit. His height is perfect though. it makes him seem about 8-10 years old.

He should be more like 5 years old. Theoretically, he was born a year ago, but Dragons age weirdly. I'll see what I can do- thanks for pointing that out ^^

no problem. if you need some examples, just ask. I'm more than happy to help.

No no... It's fine ^^ I sometimes forget. I've given people 6 fingers, and made 13 hour clocks. Sometimes you get caught p making them smaller and forget to make them look childish ^^; It's how it is

I've done the wrong hand sword thing too. usually my stuff gets drawn out about twice before I do the final bout, and my sweet bff crits it for me. I'm gonna have to find a new crit soon kuz we're headed to different colleges. she always catches my mistakes for me.

It's difficult though... http://www.paperdemon.com/comic/page/5/3.html Spot the freak with the 6 fingers!! It bugged me WAY after it was printed, the freak pic. IT bypassed me, my writers, my letter/editor, AND my colourist. I happened to look at it and go "There's something not quite right..." There it is- printed in friggin black and white too T.T It's *so* sad...

you just get caught up with something else that needs your attention. it happens to the best of us.