Critiques for "Maurice Engelen"

If you post a reference for it I could assist, but you haven't and I can't find one so it's difficult to compare ^^; His lips look too big to me thoguh, and his hair too dark, but he may not have bleach blond hair in your reference....

Artistic liberty actually - anf the picture I found was very small with harsh lighting - the same went for the music videos that I was watching at the time.

I think part of it is that he still looks too young too

Figured it'd be artistic liberty ^^

Donno- Its a bit hard to critique once you say that though, cause at theat point, you obviously know what your drawing, cause you're starting to break rules of proportions- right? Its a bit difficult to crit at that point cause I'd only be criting on personal opinion, and not how to make it better. Looking at art of him though, I think his eyes aren't rockstar enough, and his hair needs to be white. Maybe make a thing about it by making the background grey. He's got alot of angles on his face, so maybe if you make him look a little more gaunt? Specially around the eyes- the eyes is what makes him look young. The rest of him is ok. Give him depth under his eyes and that's a big starting point to hiting him on the head ^^ Otherwise, it's a tad difficult to roast, sorry ^^;

The artistic liberty was only the hair - I like him more phisically with darker hair.

Thank you for the rest.*bounces off*