Critiques for "Father and Son"

This is a touching piece. The story excerpt is a good addition, too.

Mmm, I think it needs a background. To add to the mood. It's still very good on its own, though.

Thank you so much.

I wanted to add a background, I just wasn't sure what. lol. A table and chair is what would be behind them in the story, but I didn't know if that would take away or not. *shrug*

Thanks again.

It's worth a shot, yah?

Well, I like it either way. You're welcome.