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 SliverbaneTotal Posts: 268Apr 20, 2008 2:12 amYou did wonderfully! You tackled the eye situation with spectacular results! I especially like how you added the smokeyness around the eyes. --- Guano smells like a dirty sock full of old cheese and farts! - Gonard |
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 wisdom72 (Reply)Total Posts: 265Apr 20, 2008 6:28 pmThank you. I wasn't going to add the smoky look, but then I remembered a nice pic I once saw where some of the white horses had that, and how it looked pretty good. So I tried it. I think I'll do the same to the legs as well. That way, it will balance it out a bit. What do you think? --- Available for Characater Art Commissions* |
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Sliverbane (Reply)Total Posts: 268Apr 21, 2008 10:56 amHmm, around the hooves you say. Maybe something more gray than black. Or you could give them gray hooves along with the smoke. Nonetheless it sounds like a good idea! --- Guano smells like a dirty sock full of old cheese and farts! - Gonard |
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 arkillianTotal Posts: 2736Apr 24, 2008 4:18 am*squees* --- |
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wisdom72 (Reply)Total Posts: 265Apr 26, 2008 5:12 amYep. Let us away from this boring and glum world then!! --- Available for Characater Art Commissions* |
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