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LoneWandererD

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Jun 21, 2008 11:33 pm

hey hey nice job kcoleman [emoticon]

my only gripe is that Kagome's skirt might be a little short, buts thats just me

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BogusRed

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Jun 22, 2008 10:23 am

It's cute! ^.^

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*is warm and fuzzy now* Looks like you wanted to see them kiss in the last chapter as much as I did. Only I was "forced" to create "In The Same Boat" then my plot bunny made me create a Mini Kissing set of plushies of them (see my website- they're available for sale right now).

Anyway, great job on this. I really like the fact that Kagome's missing her shoe, makes me think that they're really into it and will be *cough* falling to the ground soon for a little more fun [emoticon]