Critiques for "Shisou and Aarien realism inks"

I just lost all faith in my inkwork D:, You own the pen, make it your beotch!

Oh BAH. XD Nonono, don't say that. D: I could point out to out things that are really bad about this and things that, because I am a cheap bastard, copped out on making better. XC;;
8C No being hard on yourself.

Naugh- I like this better as just a clean lineart. MAybe some spot colours. Some pictures are meant to be finished. This looks like its almost there to me ^^

I guess I would wonder as to what kind of spots and where, I mean...if you see the original lineart there is a huge blaring mistake from me pressing too hard with the pencil. >_0;; I weep. ;_;

Sorry ^^; I meant like minimalistic amounts of colour- like... only colouring the hair or something. Very retro. It has a retro feel to it all ready

*head tilt* Retro, huh.. Hmm.. I should look that particular style up then, it sounds like it could be fun. Thank you!

mmm...congrats

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