Critiques for "Forever Together WIP"

Who cares if it's been done to death? It's still what we want! And this is beautiful, I don't even think I want it in color (and I love to see things in color) it's so good. Hey I was so miffed myself that not only did my plot bunny attack me and force me to make a fanart but I *just* finished a Mini I/K kissing set of plushies too! Which are available for sale if you know someone who'd like them You'll have to look at them and tell me how they compare to the pups since they're the same size.