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AnimeBoyToyKoibito

Total Posts: 901

Nov 7, 2005 5:18 pm

You might want to raise her arm up a bit. It is proportonally wrong right here. And try to bring the hat down a bit lower so that her head doesn't look so square at the top too. It looks good, keep at it.

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Strive for understanding over being understood.

~~Its what I live by.

Tomoroto  (Reply)

Total Posts: 38

Nov 7, 2005 5:34 pm

Wow, thanks! My older sister usually only says that it sucks! I like how you did it! you told me what was wrong, and how to fix it! Thanks again!

AnimeBoyToyKoibito  (Reply)

Total Posts: 901

Nov 7, 2005 5:45 pm

Of course that is what we here at PaperDemon do!! And dont listen to your sister, we are all good, we just have to develop ourselves. [emoticon] Which is why I joined!! to develop!!

Just keep at it!!

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Strive for understanding over being understood.

~~Its what I live by.

Tomoroto  (Reply)

Total Posts: 38

Nov 7, 2005 5:35 pm

Wow, thanks! My older sister usually only says that it sucks! I like how you did it! you told me what was wrong, and how to fix it! Thanks again!

Tomoroto  (Reply)

Total Posts: 38

Nov 7, 2005 5:35 pm

Wow, thanks! My older sister usually only says that it sucks! I like how you did it! you told me what was wrong, and how to fix it! Thanks again!

Tomoroto  (Reply)

Total Posts: 38

Nov 7, 2005 5:35 pm

Wow, thanks! My older sister usually only says that it sucks! I like how you did it! you told me what was wrong, and how to fix it! Thanks again!

Tomoroto  (Reply)

Total Posts: 38

Nov 7, 2005 5:35 pm

Wow, thanks! My older sister usually only says that it sucks! I like how you did it! you told me what was wrong, and how to fix it! Thanks again!

Tomoroto  (Reply)

Total Posts: 38

Nov 7, 2005 5:36 pm

Wow, thanks! My older sister usually only says that it sucks! I like how you did it! you told me what was wrong, and how to fix it! Thanks again!


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