Critiques for "Reflections"

Wow that's a really really cool idea! I really like the concept in this piece.

Thanks The fanfic is really coming out well, and surprisingly enough, I've gotten a bunch of GUYS hocked on GL over it. It's really fun to write though, cause Kyle is such a funny, typical guy kinda guy, and so is Alex, and together, they just sooo fun to write!! Gonna post it when I can figure a way of posting it withouth having to manually put in all the html