Critiques for "Pawn Shop Interior Line art"

Wow, Red, you never cease to amaze me. I wish I could do something like that. It looks so beautiful. Everything looks as if it could come right out.

Thank you Katie

You're welcome, Susie!

I really like how you draw the details, the architecture is great, I am waiting for the finished work, nice work!

Thank you Okami

Wow theres a lot of work in this! There's no roasting to be done since i feel like everything is where it should be, the way it should be! My eyes get lost in this, such depth and details. I love it!

Thank you Lili.

The perspective is fantastic and the clocks look really cool, I know the final version will be awesome ^^

thanks dfelon

wow thats awesome. Im amazed at the fact that the glass is actually see through...I can't do that with just pen.lol!

Thanks Inuyashababe

Wow Susie, this is really cool! There are so many neat little things to look at. I really like the way you did the stairs with all the thin lines, and I love the gothic looking archways in the upstairs area. The clocks are really awesome. I like the little spiral chains hanging down from them. I like all the musical instruments hanging on the back wall also.

The only thing I see that looks kind of off to me is how the gutiar on the far right side overlaps the gutiar next to it...to me it looks like it overlaps a little too much, maybe its just the angle though. I can't wait to see this colored, great job!

Thanks for the comments Christina. I'll change that guitar. you are right. why didn't i notice it before? lol anyway, this will be shaded in black and white, not color.

Very nice perspective job there. I love the little details you put in even though its line art. I shudder to think what it will look like when you work your magic. I'm sure what ever you decide to do will be just awe inspiring.

Thank you Dennis. I haven't seen you in a while. How are you?

Hi BR! I've been gone for a while as I had to take care of some personal probs but now i'm doing great and am currntly working on some things I hope to post soon.

I'm glad to hear you are doing good. Can't wait for you to post.

The sketch is awesome Susie! I love the composition. It's nice to see the old together with the new,the cookoo clocks sure bring nostalgia. The amount of detail amazed me when I saw this. Great job! I know I review it kinda late but I just saw the colored version and I can see how different they are.
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Thank you Atlantis, even if it is late lol

You're welcome.