Critiques for "Thirst"

think i like the eyes the other way..still it looks cool...

I hate it, i cant look at it anymore... Things happen! But thanks

I like this version too! I don't think you ruined it at all. The darker red shade definately adds more of an evil feeling to it. I like both of them

thanks Jill, now that i look at it, it's not that bad... I still aint touching it anymore though!

I think 'bloodthirst' would be more suitable to call it. You know Lili, it perfectly describes your story 'My Dawn of the Dead'. I read it quite a while ago. It was really great actually, and this picture reminded me of it. The face looks incredible, and I love her expression , but I think her lips and eyes could do some shading, like a white in the eye where the light falls, and a shade on her lower lip. Otherwise it looks very good. The red and the blue in her eyes makes us be drawn to her. Well done!

lol i hadnt thought of that. I think your right... About the story... its probably gonna stop there, i had another idea, i just dont know when i'll work on it. It would be, several Dawns of the dead. Like seeing different person live or die through their dawn...
Thanks a lot for the review. Glad you like her.

I'd love to read more whenever it's ready and you're welcome!

I like it with the darker, bolder colors! I think it was a good move. *thumbs up*

Oh i phewww...i took a risk with this one, i wasnt too sure! I'm still unsure Thanks

I like the concept and color scheme. Tip: Use turpentine over your colored pencils (dab a little onto a kleenex and smudge it over) and it will break down the wax and make your colors pencil look like water color! Play with that technique, it's totally awesome!

Thanks for the tip...I'll keep it in mind for future work! This one...i ain't touchin no mo