Critiques for "Dremma Devghan - Color"

So is this the repost or the first try? I really love the hair! This is a great pic. The background is nice too. I also like the suttle shading on his body. I think it would have been better though if he wasn't so close to the edge of the paper (on the left, right, and top). If you are redoing it, just give some more space around the sides.

This is actually a first try. I plan on reposting soon. I'm just looking for first impression and any need for improvements. I do agree the edges of the image are very close to him. Adding some space is certainly a must!

Oh yeah cuteness!
He's handsome!
Sugoi!
his body is so delisyoso!

Nice job good try
damn me not try that yet.

The hands needs improvement though...

The hands need improvment in what way?

Make it more precise and with much more detail or manly looking... the fingers ain't much nice too look that's all but the rest is Cuteness... and totally yummy

Way ahead of you... I redesigned his hands a while back. ^_^ I'm working on coloring the new version. Perhaps I'll post the line art to the sketches gallery.

Wow, the shading and colors are realy well done and this is your first CG?!

Yes, this was my first. Took me three days! I'm working on improving my techniques.

That's awesome. You did a great job on him. He looks pretty hot. *winks* You know, for a demon. *smiles* I especially love the subtle hint in the center of the flap. Ooh,la la. I really like the colors in the background. They flow so beautifully together. Great job.