Critiques for "Generations Bit 6 Slain party"

I would so buy it. And about the coloring? It's hard to say...I see where you're going with it, but I think the linework is too clean to fit the style you're going after. Maybe a sketchier type of linework would pull it off. I still love it though, and like I said, I would definitely buy a (shirt or whatever) with it on it.

oh ok that's a good idea. i'll try making the lines scratchy and sketchy. if that doesn't work, then i'll just make the lines clean. Thank you Heidi

very funny, I like it alot especially the guy with the knife sticking out of him.

Thank you Botan

you're welcome BogusRed.

Ahahahaha...*falls from her chair laughing her butt off* This is hillarious! I love these "You lose"or "game over" Piccys in the games! And the crosses in their eyes! Awesome! These pictures always make you want to play again...

hahah thanks Saiyangirl.