Critiques for "Kitty"

Nice work! I like the pixelation.
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"You Only Live Twice or so it seems,
One life for yourself and one for your dreams.
You drift through the years and life seems tame,
Till one dream appears and love is its name."

Nancy Sinatra- "You Only Live Twice" soundtrack

Thanks do you think i sould add a tir on talk?

What do you mean?
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"You Only Live Twice or so it seems,
One life for yourself and one for your dreams.
You drift through the years and life seems tame,
Till one dream appears and love is its name."

Nancy Sinatra- "You Only Live Twice" soundtrack

I mean should i add a tail

Actually it might be good for the composition, if you put it under the name text and just because of her name, but she looks pretty good without it too.
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"You Only Live Twice or so it seems,
One life for yourself and one for your dreams.
You drift through the years and life seems tame,
Till one dream appears and love is its name."

Nancy Sinatra- "You Only Live Twice" soundtrack

okay i'll see what she look like with one and post it