Critiques for "Equity characters Part 1"

I think it looks great. I love the way you did their hair. I like Jack and Gail the most here. Great job!

HAH! I told one of my fanboys about Jack- the blokey Dragon with powers over the Dream time. 'Wimpy' powers. My friend nearly fell over in shock!! He's gonna be great though- He over acts and gets all bruty to cover up that he needs to sleep to use his powers :3 Gail may change between now and the comic. She's now no longer Phauroran...

I don't know your story but he sounds cool. I think it's nice to have a character with a personality complex. I don't like all the superman type heroes.

Well, this story is based in the same world/different time line to my story Dragon twins, which I do have story posted here for. I think it'd be awesome to do cause it's tapping into the past of a guy that could have been the strongest Arkillian Dragon had his spirit waited another generation. He did some awesome things in his past, and I want to exploit this since the novel wont. He's not a Superman type though- more of a super knight type. A knight with magic It's all good. First I need to get onto Slayer's Game though ^^;