Critiques for "Angel Colored"

This is very nice! The only thing I would tell you to watch out for is to try not to squish her breasts so close next time. Still very very nice!! I love it.

Shoulders are much too broad which makes her upper back seem unnaturally thick. Shoulders are usually pretty propotionate to the hips, use them as a reference. This can be easily fixed. I think it would look a lot better if you just slimmed up the upper back

Ahh, she's done. I don't have enough patience to go back and fix things

very nice...the pic kicks some serious ass!