Critiques for "Equity Cover?"

Looks spiffy.

Thanks

Nice concept. But you might try to put the sword on a side view, or draw the sword at a farther view so you can bring the faces a little closer together.

The sword can't be side on- and the sword is more important than the men. Mabe seperate them more insteed? The sword is Equity btw...

Maybe you can draw back the sword and show more of it. Maybe at least half the sword.

The problem is then it wouldn't be dominating, and this is the most reckonisable area of the sword.

BTW- I dig your icon of Jay and silent Bob XD

Hmmm, I say that because It spilts them in the middle but as one face it looks too spread apart, But the concept is great.

Hmmmm- needs refining. I still like my first cocept of just the sword with power swirling around it....

Well, I can't wait to see the first issue.

Me either, but it takes second to Salyer's Game, which luckily I DO have seperate writers and a colourist for ^^ All I need to do is pencils and inks. And the biarchy resizing crap *groans* Hate that part...

Maybe you should get a Tracer. I mean Inker.

That sounded bitter- inking is actully really hard to do you know...

Oh no I wasn'r trying to sound bitter. Most comic book artist have inkers since drawing takes so much of their time. And some of the best inkers are damn good artist as well. Like Thibert. I't would save you some time and pressure to get an inker.

And, the Tracer comment goes back to "Chasing Amy" The whole Inker Tracer scene at the convention.

Ok- I don't get the referance, but these comics- I haven't gotten anything back from them except kudos. We don't have the money for an inker let alone a colourist for my other comic if I do it. It's out of love at the moment....

You might find a volunteer. Someone that looking for practice and the experience. Go watch "Chasing Amy" right now! LOL its worth it. Jay and Bob are in it.

Where do I find it? ^^;

Go movie rental store.
Clerks,Chasing Amy,Mall Rats, Dogma, Jay and Silent Bob strike back and soon to come out Clerks 2 All movies with Jay and Silent Bob.