Critiques for "Dolphiny Sora"

Actually his tail needs to be longer I think. I would make the tail as long as normal legs and the tips of your fingers extend to mid thigh, they seem about at knee- level here. Hope that helps ;D

I think so...
Thank you ^_^

His tail looks like It needs to be a little longer, but the proprotions look right to me. The coloring you have done so far looks great too. Just make Sora's tail longer and It'll be good. ^.~ *FAVES*

*scratches head* I think you're right. XD; Thank you ^_^

The Breast/shoulder area seem abit big but it could be just me

I like to make them big sometimes XD;; Makes the characters look stronger *3*

lol yea

I know how you feel I'm not so great with proportions but i hope this helps. I think his hands are a bit big and also his head. Two heads should fit in his torso here it looks as if only one and a half can and also I think his tail should be a bit longer. anyways I hope that helped you out

Well.. since he is Sora from KDH.. his head and hands are supposed to be really big XD; And I already knew about the tail thing.. everyone's pointed that out so far. But anyways thanks! ^^;

I think so far you are doing pretty good. this is a REALLY hard pose.

I did do a little visual crit for you but its such a tough position that i don't think i even got it right.

Just a couple things to really watch for is his hips are a little wide, the shapes of his forearms need some reshaping. And also the mermaid part could probably be a little longer.

Thank you very much! And actually in KDH2, his hips in this form are rather big.. tis what makes him look more adult I guess o: But I don't know if I made it look right. XD; Anyways thanks! :3

no problem

Oh yesh and thanks so much for the visual critique! Me must get used to the feature I did'nt see it the first time XD; I think it will help improve my pic yes :3

ooOOooo, the color is great! I think his body is a bit short though, that's all! It's wonderful!! xD

Thank you!
Excuse number 21424321432: Sora ish short so it's fine with me I think XD;
Thanks still :3

Haha, that's true!! xD

wow, must fav

thanks

n/p ^^

His upper body is just fine, to me. And I realli like his face, but I think the fish like part (I know, but it's 9 in the morning do you realli expect me to remember what it's called ) I think it's too short and thins out a little too quickly at the bottom. I think thats all you need to fix. I hope that helped.

Okee. People keep pointing that out. So I know already now. But thankies anyways.

Sorri, I didn't even read the other comments. (Kicks self)

It's okay. XD hehe