Critiques for "Brook and Athena Lineart"

very nice start- I am assuming your coloring this though- if not- awesome pic!

It's a WIP, so yes There isn't many I'd post here and not colour. My problem now is finding time to colour it ^^;

This looks great so far. The expressions on their faces is really nicely done as well as the poses.

This is a small thing to watch out for. Tangents. Attached is a diagram showing where you've got a couple tangents. they are easy fixes. here's a link describing what tangents are:

Where do you see them? The whole thing overlaps as far as I can see (I never knew they were called tangents... ^^; )

whoops. i included the wrong file with my vis crit. sorry about that. see the new one.

LOL! It makes alot more sence now!! *huggles BR and her confusion* I'll remember to touch those lines up for the colouring stage. Heck- I actually did pretty good since this was all off the top of my head ^^; LOL!

yeah this is a really great drawing.