Critiques for "Hynotised"

Wow, that looks great. I havn't seen Sailor Moon or Sailor anything in like 2 years -.-'...

XD Yeah!! They're bringing all the golden oldies from when I was a kid back again- it's great ^^

*feels old*

When I looked at that on the main page, I was like, naaah, that cant be SM and TM. =P But it was and I squeeled cause I havent seen Sailor Moon fanart in forever. Actually, I havent seen Sailor Moon in forever. And what else sucks, is that I have never seen the begining or end of the series XP What was funny was that I was actually listening to Hypnotised as I looked at this ^-^ Well, now getting to the art, its wonderful. I love Serinas expression. Now as for the advice, I think that you should move Dariens mouth down slightly. ^-^ Well, thats it for this review XP

I KNOW!! Sailor Moon kind of dissapeared for a while, then I went to Waihi for an anime weekend and the hosts girlfriend.... what am I saying, he's here at PD... Murk's girlfriend had like... 1 to 14 DVDs of Sailor Moon and I was like... MUST BORROW!! She was cool with it cause she got to borrow my Dot Hacks. I was actually really impressed with SM now I'm older cause of the subtle character development. You watch it and go 'This is gonna be childish' but it's NOT! I love manga ^^

As for Darion's mouth- I'm not sure... maybe a little. The mouth comes up a little when a person smiles, but I may have gone a little far. Tis OK though- I am going to redraw this so it's all good Cheers!