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Vegetacub

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May 30, 2006 2:31 am

Great work! I wish, I could work proportions out so good like you. Im waiting for the final work to see.

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Jun 3, 2006 9:02 am

thank you Vegetacub [emoticon]

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Dollmaker

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May 30, 2006 7:18 am

Something about his left hand...it doesn't seem right. It doesn't really look like he's holding her. Like, wouldn't his fingers curve with her body more?

Other than that, it's very nice. [emoticon] I can't wait to see it finished! Whee!

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Jun 3, 2006 9:02 am

yeah i need a red pen crit on the hand. I didn't want it to look too much like his other hand because it causes the twinning effect but i'm not really sure what else to do with it.

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Dollmaker  (Reply)

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Jun 3, 2006 10:35 am

That, I'm afraid I can't help you with. [emoticon] I got enough art smarts to see something's not quite right with it, but actually fixing it is a step above my current abilities. [emoticon] Sorry.

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Jun 3, 2006 10:51 am

Le sigh... Woe is me... For where art thou is a good red pen critic...

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Dollmaker  (Reply)

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Jun 3, 2006 2:33 pm

I'm sorry. [emoticon] I wish I could help.

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CelticLady

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May 31, 2006 12:15 pm

I think it looks great. Can't wait to see it in color [emoticon] It's a very sweet lookin' drawing.

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Jun 3, 2006 9:01 am

Thank you Celtic Lady [emoticon]

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CelticLady  (Reply)

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Jun 4, 2006 6:57 am

you're very welcome [emoticon]

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Kichi

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Jun 1, 2006 12:49 pm

I can't roast you it's too awesome!

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"Being a good fiend is like being a photographer, you have to search for the right moment!" - Prince Vegeta

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Jun 3, 2006 9:01 am

Thank you Kichi [emoticon]

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shadowdragonsphinx

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Jul 11, 2006 11:20 pm

your art is truely amazing, its the thing that got me to join here.
great pic

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Jul 12, 2006 6:06 am

Thank you Shadow [emoticon]

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Crystal Lasill

Aug 9, 2006 4:50 pm

MY ZARBIE BARBIE!!!

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The lil' black cat girl

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