Critiques for "Love Is Never Silver and Gold"

Nessarose, I think you've got a great idea going here, but I think you should work on shawdows to make your artwork look less flat. It's a pain in royal end to do it on paint, but believe me, it'll make your work look a lot better. Maybe also add some shine or twinkle to the eyes.
I know what your aiming for and I'm sure you can make it happen.

I know, when I draw with pencils and stuff it's musch more real but my scanner is permanently broken...

Have any friends with scanners?

My friend VegSpicer does, but I haven't been able to use it.