Critiques for "Tai"

*grin* Well, maybe he's got an itch on his fanny... no? Well, perhaps holding a torch to light his way? He looks like a traveller. Or maybe even, since he looks a tad bit evil, he could be clutching the head of his latest victim, on his way to skull-i-fy it....

It's interesting to see a work-in-progress from you, me friend.