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BogusRed

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Jul 26, 2006 10:30 pm

Hi AnimeBoyToy,
You want a roast? You've got one!

This is going great so far. The poses are really nice. However, there are some porportional issues that should be resolved before moving to ink and color. I noticed that the heads are unusually large. It is common for artists to draw important things bigger than other parts. We often draw the eyes too big without realizing it because we are trying so hard to makethem look good. See the visual crit that I've attached to this comment.

Hope this helps

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AnimeBoyToyKoibito  (Reply)

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Jul 26, 2006 10:35 pm

Oh Thank you very much! This helps me out alot! I felt that something was off about it, but I couldnt quite place my finger on it.
[emoticon] Thank you for the grand help!

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BogusRed  (Reply)

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Jul 26, 2006 11:21 pm

you're very welcome!

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Keenarnor

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Aug 13, 2006 2:11 pm

Nice...but a little light i guess *shrugs*

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