Critiques for "DBZ Vegeta - No Need For Words"

BogusRed

Total Posts: 2850

Apr 13, 2005 11:05 am

It's cool. I like the expression and technique but his mouth is a little too high. I'd suggest just taking it in photoshop, cutting it out (along with the lip shadow) and moving it down some.

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karana kaou (Reply)

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Apr 13, 2005 11:19 am

I'll take you up on that. His mouth was something I was also sitting a little uneasy with...I'll go and give that a shot. Thanks!

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Okami

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Apr 13, 2005 12:05 pm

It is rare to see him like this, that is why he makes me laught so much.

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karana kaou (Reply)

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Apr 13, 2005 2:13 pm

^.^ I loved the expression when I first saw it.

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Alyssa Filth

Total Posts: 126

Apr 13, 2005 2:16 pm

His mouth is kinda close to his nose, but other than that, he's completely in rare form, which I love. *cuddles* Great!

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karana kaou (Reply)

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Apr 13, 2005 2:18 pm

Thank you! I took Bogus Red's advice before and took this back to Paint Shop. I got the mouth all fixed up! I've got a little work to do on the coloring around it, but it already looks better.

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Alyssa Filth (Reply)

Total Posts: 126

Apr 13, 2005 2:20 pm

Spiffy! Can't wait to see it all fixed! ^^

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Dbzbabe

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Apr 13, 2005 2:57 pm

AWW! he looks adorable ^_^ nice job on it!!

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karana kaou (Reply)

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Apr 13, 2005 6:13 pm

Thanks ^.^

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Kichi

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Apr 13, 2005 3:14 pm

AHH! This is so great! I love it!!

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karana kaou (Reply)

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Apr 13, 2005 6:15 pm

Wow, people are so nice here. Thanks!

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Stealth Nerd

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Jun 4, 2005 10:48 pm

This is gorgeous! I'm loving the expression; you captured it perfectly [emoticon]

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karana kaou (Reply)

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Jun 5, 2005 4:50 am

Thanks so much! I think this particular movie is absolutely hillarious, and this pic and the circumstances surrounding it made it that way. [emoticon]

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Stealth Nerd (Reply)

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Jun 5, 2005 3:28 pm

I agree! Just looking at this makes me laugh! lol
You did a great job portraying that moment! ^^

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Re Rodri

Aug 21, 2005 9:31 pm

I love it [emoticon]
its awesome! And anyways he looks really cute in there, id looove to kiss him...hehe
I have a crush on a drawing...dont you find that odd? ,
well Good job
I havnt seen that Movie