The Final Sunset: Page 15

Artist's Comments

This is one of the MANY pages that hates me. I'll keep the description as breif as I can cause I have less than 2 days to do 4 pages of toning/words, but this one I had to redraw not only Bryan's hand so they were both holding the child, but augment Blaze's mouth in the bttome right panel.

Thank you very much to everyone that gave me suggestions on how to fix it ^^ I see where I went wrong now, and it's alot better than it was before

I'm loving Drakobtius's lines in this- "You have the observation skill of a rock" XD Bryan REALLY does. He's got such a BAD case of tunnel vision ^^ The only reason Drakobitus joined in was cause Bryan looked like fun to beat up T.T Now he's all scared. Poor Drakobitus. Oh well. He got Blaze's attention pretty quick ^^