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Firstly- I want to thank all those here at PD that gave me all the great advice on the WIP of this page. I've tried to take it all in- Bryan looks alot more balance now ^^ I hope the writing makes more sence too. Do tell me if it doesn't
I really like this page- it has a nice mood to it. The rain, Bryan sitting there all lonely all torn and worn armour like, barren wasteland... I feel so sorry for him. Sorta. He can't be too helpless with THAT sword in his hands though O.o
All comments are HUGELY appreciated
I really want feed back to how people like my comics- ta!!
Spell checking care of Helen Torkington (one of my Slayer's Game writers)