The Final Sunset: Page 4

Artist's Comments

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Oh man- I'm starting to give myself a headache with this comic. I'm starting to get to the difficult pages- the ones I'm not sure how I want it to look. This one was hard cause I had to have Blaze transforming into his Equity armour. In the end- I left the shinnyness and added the speech box. I need this one by this weekend, so I no longer have a luxury of time. I may have to post later pages first before this one.   *stresses slightly* I think I can still make it...

Anyways- The shinnyness ended up looking ok- I've changed the script on this page slightly so Bryan had a less selfish reason to cry. He's not figting yet, so he has no reason to e "I'm not good enough" emo. Insteed, he's worried about his people. I feel so sorry for him- he REALLY doesn't underdstand his Father's motives, but then again, not many people do. Including the Drakobitus. I must be getting clucky though, cause I just want to ripp poor little Bryan out of the screen and give him a big hug cause he looks so sad

Again- any advanced crit you want to give. I MAY be able to change it in time...