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This is your first sprite comic? I can relate. Not as easy as it looks.
But this is nice for a first try. I think your main problem is your spelling. It's...well, if you need an editor, I'm available.
Also, your text and your text bubble alignment seem kind of off, but that'll get better with practice. If you haven't, you should really check out Keenarnor's tutorial. It helped me wonders.
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18:23PM, Feb 2, 2007 GMT
| Rank: Dragoon
| Points: 3223
This is real good, but it will only get real good once I enter the scene.
What have I become? My sweetest freind....everyone I know, goes away in the end...but you can have it all my empire of dirt, I will let you down, I will make you hurt...
16:30PM, Oct 12, 2006 GMT
| Rank: Adventurer
| Points: 508
heey wait a minute Its funny But I can do more than shooting arrows. What happends to my fire arrows? XD
Its time for my strongest attack! FINALE!!!!!
(as my golden rifle glows, it takes form of an even greater rifle)
06:20AM, Oct 12, 2006 GMT
| Rank: Challenger
| Points: 433
Hiya Keen. I moved your two Final Fantasy comics from Misc Anime and Manga to Final Fantasy.
Your satisfaction is important to me. Please let me know if there's anything else I can do for you or provide for you on PaperDemon.
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23:44PM, Oct 11, 2006 GMT
| Rank: Elite Knight
| Points: 8533
Hey this is just a test comment, just to make sure it's working, reply if it does. Nice comic too
"...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!"
15:31PM, Oct 9, 2006 GMT
| Rank: Dragoon
| Points: 3118
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