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I like the chaos theory reference. There's hardly enough writing to give you a crit yet however cause I know someone else did the art. Who ever does your speech bubbles though- tell them to make the speech left to right as well as top to bottom. That first page read backwards, and it makes for difficult reading That's all for now >.>
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