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this isn't so bad. it's actually really well done but the thing is, you make it too cluttered. You need to be gracious with your spacing and not make it where it's gathered together. it makes the reader very confused on where to read. make the one page your done into two pages instead. this will lengthened your story as well and make it easier to read and understand. Make sure you are using the 'S' method when make a comic.
the first panel to read is the top right, then the next on next to that or if the first panel takes up the top part of the page, then it will follow down to the middle right then middle left and finally the bottom right and bottom left.
this will help you. and plan which text bubble you want to stand out more than another in each panel. it will be very helpful if you did this.

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