Whellis Comments

Aw, LOVE the city in the bottom panels!! Did you have ref for those, or a streak of genius came? So much details and realism!

I love that random blast of yellow and orange in the background of those two panels. I don't know why, but it just makes me laugh.

My only complaint would be the left second-row box; the face is too out of proportion XD

But I like the use of the glow in the first box- creates a difference with the rest of the boxes.

Dunno what's Ergo, but yay for the Terminator! Hahahaha XD

"What's the matter? Does THIS scare you? Well, what comes next will be even more scary- Judgement Day is coming- global thermonuclear warheads will rise, the machines will rebel, you must find sanctuation. Worry not, I'LL BE BACK."

Sorry...... (well, at least this page is fun in a Terminator way- entertainment level beyond its design)

tHAT FIRST PANEL IS WELL COMPOSED ^^ tHIS IS A GREAT PAGE HON

Yay! More Whellis ^^

A ha- a human deceives more than the deceivers ^^ Gun him down :3

Neat world yer building there kiddo. The art is a little lax but that will improve with time. The story is well thought out though, and I read all the way through, which is a big compliment considering I never read through anything! LOL Keep up the great work!

i like it so far

Oh- do post them soon- I'm really enjoying reading this I can just feel that this treaty is gonna screw up cause of Clay or something. Didn't know Piper was a reporter. O.o