I tried something a little different with the coloring. And I added a texture to the page to give it a more vintage-like feel.
I must say that this is a really sad page for myself. I have two dogs myself and I love both of them dearly and I couldn't imagine losing either of them. And (as far as my continuity goes) Dorothy grew up with Toto and I could only imagine how painful it would be for her to lose him.
Dorothy would be about 17 in the first panel, and 19-21 in the last two panels.
See the last panel with Dorothy? That's the closest you're going to get to seeing her face anytime soon.
Does the hairstyle look familiar? Think someone who was very close to Dorothy Gale.