And another page done!
I think I've found a happy median between Screen-tones and Gradients. And that makes me happy inside.
A little bit of flashback... I debated whether or not to include this in the story... But I think it adds to why maybe there's some animosity between Terry and Richard.
When I started this... I originally did not intend for Terry to "talk" to the reader... in fact I didn't want that... but I really couldn't get some of the things across that I wanted to without doing so. Originally I had intended for a 3rd Person Omniscient Narrator type thing... Much like the original Novel i wrote.. but it was too impersonal.. So I changed it.