PseudoDragon: She wants you, Bryan...

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Draw dragons to improve your composition skills. #Smaugust composition challenge. August 1 - 31

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Another page of PseudoDragon ^^ WEEEEEEEEH!

Um yeah- the lineart for this was 100% horrible, but my tablet saved the day ^^ The chibis = love, Mr Fraus is so unbearibly hot in the second panel and I AGAIN want to give Bryan a cuddle in those last two panels.

Ahhhh- Alex :3 "Waah? How can I help it if Weilder is so boring?" XD

AND OH NOES!! I nearly forgot Mr Fraus's tie!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!!!

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This story is really good. The dialogue gets a little exposition-ish here and there, but it's not too overwhelming (which is nice. Lengthy backstory monologues are quite mind-numbing).

Your anatomy gets a bit wonky here and there, but the overall pacing and blocking of your panels is rather good. The layout and typography could use a bit of work.

Despite the drawbacks, I am quite interested in these characters. I'll look forward to your next installment.

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"Man- I was hoping to cut trig." XD LOL awesome. Bryan in the last two panels are totally cuddle worthy ^_^

Friendship is like peeing on yourself: everyone can see it, but only you get the warm feeling that it brings.

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