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Topic: Beta needed, please

Project_Xii

Forum: Writing    Posted: Sep 11, 2007 4:11 am

Lol. It was a good way to prove my dislike for repeated words though. Now you've experienced it first hand!! Hehe. I'll try to get through chapter 2 when i can. i'm extremly busy, but i'll do my best.
Topic: Beta needed, please

Project_Xii

Forum: Writing    Posted: Sep 10, 2007 7:49 am

Oh! I'm sorry, I should have been more specific when i said I was 'trundling off to read your stuff'. By that, I actually meant I'm doing just what you asked people to do there :) Lucky. I'm almost done scrutinising your first chapter and i'll probab...
Topic: Fan fiction?

Project_Xii

Forum: Writing    Posted: Sep 8, 2007 3:00 am

Hmmm... I don't know enough about it I guess :ponders: I was sorta going on Stephen Kings Dark Tower series where he referenced almost every well known story under the sun. He wouldn't have asked permission for absolutely every reference.... wou...
Topic: Fan fiction?

Project_Xii

Forum: Writing    Posted: Sep 8, 2007 2:59 am

Hmmm... I don't know enough about it I guess :S I was sorta going on Stephen Kings Dark Tower series where he referenced almost every well known story under the sun. He wouldn't have asked permission for absolutely every refernee.... would he? *attem...
Topic: Fan fiction?

Project_Xii

Forum: Writing    Posted: Sep 7, 2007 6:15 pm

On Sep 7, 2007 8:54 am, BogusRed said: [quote] Hm... I don't know. I think there is a point where if you borrow a few things from another person's work it isn't fanfiction but is rather 'inspired by Rowling'. I'm not sure where that line is. But I th...
Topic: You know its a bad story when...

Project_Xii

Forum: Writing    Posted: Sep 6, 2007 4:16 pm

On Sep 6, 2007 3:36 pm, arkillian said: [quote] Cheese factor is ok as long as it's is good cheesy- like.... the story is serious then there's the dork that says something stupidly funny and it takes the edge off the scene for the characters.[/quote]...
Topic: Mary Sue's- what are they?

Project_Xii

Forum: Writing    Posted: Sep 6, 2007 7:18 am

Lol... that's really freaky. I knew nothing about this... I'm kind of ashamed to have used a Mary Sue in my story now. True, she's a tough take-no-shit black chick, which might set her apart from others. Meh.
Topic: You know its a bad story when...

Project_Xii

Forum: Writing    Posted: Sep 6, 2007 4:00 am

I've been reviewing peoples stories for years, and I think what a "good or bad" story comes down to is whether the writer has the 'knack'. So to speak. Same as people who do photography, they need to have the 'eye' for it. Bad stories can b...