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| Topic: Writing: How To Use Modifiers More Effectively | |
Forum: Writing Posted: Nov 3, 2008 4:39 pm |
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| LOL some of my drafts get rather bogged down. I'd like to say 80% of the time I'm making and effort to avoid getting too wordy. My most recent writing goof is using the wrong tense for third person! :wacko: | |
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| Topic: You want advanced critique? | |
Forum: Art Posted: Oct 27, 2008 2:05 pm |
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| Good idea! A critic profile! I put my crit style on my member profile... But I don't think anyone knows that it's there. :) | |
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| Topic: Five Tips to Avoiding Total Disaster as a Novelist | |
Forum: Writing Posted: Oct 25, 2008 10:00 am |
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| More great advice!! My brain is tingling with all this juicy info!! :lol: Five Tips to Avoiding Total Disaster as a Novelist by Kris Saknussemm From a Poor, Wretched Fool Who Had to Learn the Hard Way, for About.com If, lik... | |
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| Topic: Short Story: How to Avoid Too Much Back Story | |
Forum: Writing Posted: Oct 25, 2008 9:51 am |
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| While this article focuses on short stories I found this usefull for my long stories as well. How To Avoid Too Much Back Story By Ginny Wiehardt, About.com Do your short stories tend to get bogged down in back story? D... | |
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| Topic: City of Ember | |
Forum: Movie and TV Discussion Posted: Oct 25, 2008 9:30 am |
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| Spoilers - Beware! This film would be great for young people. I'm a little too ...er worldly, expereinces...dare I say cynical to be completely enthralled by many of the concepts depicted in this movie. If I were 10 again....I really be excite... | |
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| Topic: You want advanced critique? | |
Forum: Art Posted: Oct 25, 2008 7:10 am |
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| I'm glad you bumped this up Ark.... I went through 3 pages of the crit gallery and found almost no specific requests for feedback. To all PD/RC artists... I will not crit unless you specify what you're looking for. That's my... | |
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| Topic: Writing: How To Use Modifiers More Effectively | |
Forum: Writing Posted: Oct 25, 2008 6:51 am |
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| Another helpful article. To any naysayer's - this is just advice. I see published authors make rules, break them and make new ones all the time. One of my favorite childhood authors introduce me to the three word sentance. I... | |
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| Topic: Writing: How to Choose Point of View | |
Forum: Writing Posted: Oct 25, 2008 6:45 am |
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| I've been doing some research to boost my writing skills. Some of this I know...but I really find all of this interesting. I loath First Person. My reason is if I dislike the person telling the story I'm stuck with them... I t... | |
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| Topic: Turning Slightly Vegetarian | |
Forum: Personal, Relationship, Life Advice Posted: Oct 9, 2008 9:30 am |
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| Also look in to whether you can't digest the meat propery because of an impalace of intestinal bacterial enzymes that help you process your food... A friend of mine is very sensative to antibiotics...it kills all the good bacteria in ther syste... | |
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| Topic: Down, but not out | |
Forum: Personal, Relationship, Life Advice Posted: Sep 20, 2008 11:37 am |
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| Wooo, depressed people rule... :dance: erm... Well, I just know how you feel. Mixed emotions, pride...doubt. And I also have experiences the 'rats fleeing from a burning ship' fair weather friends gig... It hurts - a lot... | |
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| Topic: True Blood | |
Forum: Movie and TV Discussion Posted: Sep 20, 2008 11:33 am |
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| Yes, that does. I always forget to check online! | |
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| Topic: Breast size- Is bigger REALLY better in real life? | |
Forum: Personal, Relationship, Life Advice Posted: Sep 20, 2008 11:32 am |
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| Bigger breasts...ugh. I had a B cup for the first hallf of my adult life. With some weight gain I now wear a DD. I have shoulder pain and upper back aches. I do weights to strengthen my muscles but for the longest time I didn'... | |
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| Topic: How I lost my Anime Virginity... | |
Forum: General Discussion Posted: Sep 18, 2008 4:25 pm |
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| I always got a kick telling epople that the little mermaid was supposed to die!! I watched an animated version - maybe that same one Fablespinner watched...and I was intrgued by the sad ending. I'm really irritated by the whole idea that ... | |
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| Topic: True Blood | |
Forum: Movie and TV Discussion Posted: Sep 16, 2008 3:42 pm |
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| I've been really curious about the series... Feel like a dork for missing the premier episode! I'll catch up. :dance: | |
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| Topic: Erotic Art Contest (18+ ONLY!) | |
Forum: Contests Posted: Sep 9, 2008 10:18 am |
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| Shoot...three more days!! | |
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| Topic: Beyond Good and Evil 2 | |
Forum: Video Games Posted: Sep 3, 2008 4:00 pm |
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| Aaaah! So excited!! :dance: This game was so amazing. It was funny, fun to play. Great story and serious challenges! The soundtrack is phenomenal!! I finally got my lastest issue of Game Informer and was pleased to see this sequel in the ... | |
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| Topic: Anime DVDs for Sale | |
Forum: General Discussion Posted: Sep 3, 2008 3:54 pm |
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| Wooo-hooo... 1d 6 hours to go.... :bounce: | |
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| Topic: Half Blood Prince - Pushed to July 09' | |
Forum: Movie and TV Discussion Posted: Sep 2, 2008 3:10 pm |
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| Twilight and City of Ember. Yeah, I'l looking forward to those as well. | |
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| Topic: Half Blood Prince - Pushed to July 09' | |
Forum: Movie and TV Discussion Posted: Sep 1, 2008 3:21 pm |
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| Anybody know exactly why? It this a good thing? I am a bit diappointed to have to wait longer...but I HOPE this means some things are being added - improved, etc. Comments? | |
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| Topic: Erotic Art Contest (18+ ONLY!) | |
Forum: Contests Posted: Aug 25, 2008 9:19 am |
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| *points and laughs at college students* :evil: I did my time.... :innocent: | |
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