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The Final Sunset Help
Posted: Nov 1, 2006 3:49 pm
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arkillian
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Could I please have some feed back of the way this comic is going? It's only in sketch form, but I REALLY need to know if it reads ok.
ROAST ME PLEASE- just not on the quality of art
It's going to be a black and white comic.
Anything at all is awesome!! I don't normally ask for comments, so I'd appreciate this small favour![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_smile.gif)
ROAST ME PLEASE- just not on the quality of art
It's going to be a black and white comic.
Anything at all is awesome!! I don't normally ask for comments, so I'd appreciate this small favour
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Posted: Nov 1, 2006 4:59 pm
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The plot seems pretty good so far
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"...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!"
Posted: Nov 1, 2006 5:23 pm
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On Nov 1, 2006 4:59 pm, Keenarnor said:
Is it a good speed? Like not jumpy? Does it read right?
The plot seems pretty good so far
Is it a good speed? Like not jumpy? Does it read right?
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Posted: Nov 1, 2006 6:36 pm
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Ask, and ye shall recieve. ![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_yes.gif)
I just went and gave my opinions on all five pages. I hope I was able to help. I like it.
I just went and gave my opinions on all five pages. I hope I was able to help. I like it.---
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Posted: Nov 1, 2006 7:11 pm
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On Nov 1, 2006 6:36 pm, Dollmaker said:
It was excitent help too!! Would looooove 2nd/3rd opinions thouhg peoples!!![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_glomp.gif)
Ask, and ye shall recieve. I just went and gave my opinions on all five pages. I hope I was able to help. I like it.
I just went and gave my opinions on all five pages. I hope I was able to help. I like it.It was excitent help too!! Would looooove 2nd/3rd opinions thouhg peoples!!
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Posted: Nov 1, 2006 7:36 pm
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On Nov 1, 2006 5:23 pm, arkillian said:
On Nov 1, 2006 4:59 pm, Keenarnor said:
Is it a good speed? Like not jumpy? Does it read right?
The plot seems pretty good so far
Is it a good speed? Like not jumpy? Does it read right?
![[emoticon]](http://www.paperdemon.com/images/forum/mysmilies/15pxyellow_biglaugh.gif)
relax i think it's pretty good
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"...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!"
Posted: Nov 2, 2006 5:36 pm
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On Nov 1, 2006 7:11 pm, arkillian said:
On Nov 1, 2006 6:36 pm, Dollmaker said:
It was excitent help too!! Would looooove 2nd/3rd opinions thouhg peoples!!
Ask, and ye shall recieve. I just went and gave my opinions on all five pages. I hope I was able to help. I like it.
I just went and gave my opinions on all five pages. I hope I was able to help. I like it.It was excitent help too!! Would looooove 2nd/3rd opinions thouhg peoples!!
I'm glad I could be of good use.
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