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cruffins

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I've got a poem I wrote recently that needs a name. I wrote it purely to get some complex emotions out of my system. I know its all angsty teen and most likely very bad writing. I don't care. It just needs a title before I put it away. So please no critiques, just title suggestions. Thank you.

Some pieces are missing

and can't be found.

Monster emerges from inside

and makes a hungry sound.

Drugged by a doctor,

loved ones don't see,

a human doll, zombie if you will.

No, I'm not free.

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Plaything?

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How about Puppet?

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"...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!"