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Posted: Dec 31, 2007 9:44 pm
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I am now making a Police Academy multi crossover fic. Right now I have this guide sheet to help me build the story. Please tell me what you think.
Police Academy Multi-crossover guide sheet
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Posted: Dec 31, 2007 11:34 pm
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What do you want us to tell you about? There's a heap of names... Do you want us to tell you who you are missing out on?
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Posted: Jan 1, 2008 7:51 am
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Posted: Jan 1, 2008 1:06 pm
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It's hard to tell what I think of it without a story concept, and even then, storys can sound really lame until they are written. I mean... Alot of people thought Kingdom Hearts would be a failier because of the mixing of 2 pop cultures, but it was done in a way that was so unique, and concrete. It feels like a genre all together.
Tell us what your plot line is. At the moment, its a HUGE cast. At the moment, it looks like your attention would be spread out too thinkly to pay attention to all the characters. I don't know though. You may have a plot that demands a huge cast
I'm sorry for sounding rude here, but no way ^^; I don't KNOW half of those characters. Besides- I need to focus on writing Dragon Twins
I'll try to support the story as much as I can if it ever gets written though ^^ Just don't over cater yourself here ^^;
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Posted: Jan 1, 2008 8:50 pm
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Well basically the story is about Lassard's another brilliant plan for a police program. Since Citizens On Patrol turned out be a great success despite on that botched up smuggling ring. Lassard decided that he wanted to do another program just like it but this time it will be with pre-teens/teenagers for a Young International Cadet program.
Since I love the Police Academy 1-4 (5-7 sucked without Steve Guttenberg) and the anime/american series I have listed above. Why not make a crossover fic with them?
Posted: Jan 3, 2008 6:07 am
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I'd like to help you out, but phew, you got at a lost. So... what exactly is all the Lassard and Police Aca thing all about. Is it a TV series that you are rewriting with the anime characters?
But, anyhow, I agree with Arkillian, it's a HUGE cast- way too big for any plausible purpose, I believe. It'd be best to cut down the names and focus on perhaps, just twenty at most. But, well... if this is just trying to get every anime/etc name imaginable on the sheet, I... don't think it'll go very far. (Sorry for bursting the bubbles
). But, well, surprises are always possible.
Posted: Jan 3, 2008 8:08 am
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On Jan 3, 2008 6:07 am, puayen said:
I'd like to help you out, but phew, you got at a lost. So... what exactly is all the Lassard and Police Aca thing all about. Is it a TV series that you are rewriting with the anime characters?
But, anyhow, I agree with Arkillian, it's a HUGE cast- way too big for any plausible purpose, I believe. It'd be best to cut down the names and focus on perhaps, just twenty at most. But, well... if this is just trying to get every anime/etc name imaginable on the sheet, I... don't think it'll go very far. (Sorry for bursting the bubbles
). But, well, surprises are always possible.
Police Academy was a movie that had about seven sequels. First four were excellent but 5-7 sucked after Steve Guttenburg left after the 4 Police Academy movie. Then around the early 90s it became an animated series then in the mid 90s it was a live action 90s tv series but unfortunately it didn't last very long.
If you want more information it's best if you do a search on the internet. Best bet it would be wikipedia or at least Google.
As for the crossover itself, I had this day dream where the graduates of the academy get to train various characters from different series (anime/domesticated) into cops.
Posted: Jan 3, 2008 11:00 am
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Police Academy didn't have more than 20 in thier cast hon. Ho about you split them up into groups of 20 first and then start talking cause until you get a managable direction for a 50+ cast, no one is going to help out.
Specially since you need to know 10 different fandoms well to write it. Its shooting yourself in the foot. But hey- if you write it yourself it may just work ^^
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Posted: Jan 3, 2008 10:50 pm
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But I'm using the Police Academy characters the people recongized the most from the movies and if you have read the guide sheet I did seperate them into groups. All of the Officers/Captains/Lietentents/Sargents have about 5-10 anime/cartoon characters from various anime/cartoon series.