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Posted: Apr 2, 2008 1:27 pm

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Sliverbane

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 I have two suggestions:

Enlarge the summary font or make it more prominent when searching through Libraries

Make a seperate section for the Author to leave comments and requests of readers for feedback.

It could be beneath the Summary when looking through Libraries and after you click on the link its just above the Chapter/Poem ,etc.

I just thought the summary isn't presented in a fashion to get attention. Thanks.  [emoticon]

 

 

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Posted: Apr 2, 2008 7:17 pm

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sounds good. got any other suggestions for improving the writing section?

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Posted: Jul 23, 2008 9:18 pm

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 I'd love to see Mystery added as a genre. I recently submitted a story of mine that revolves around a murder mystery and while it has a fantasy type setting and a lighthearted tone, it felt odd to classify it solely as Fantasy and Humor.

Posted: Aug 3, 2008 10:28 pm

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Phish, I've added the Mystery library for you.

Sliverbane, when you meant make the font larger, did you mean when you are browsing the libraries like this page?

http://www.paperdemon.com/writinglib/New.html

...or did you mean when you are viewing a writing submission like this page?

http://www.paperdemon.com/writing/view/2866

I've just increased the font size ever so slightly and changed the font color to black for the pages when browsing libraries. I don't want to make the font much larger on this page because that would disrupt the visual hierarchy. however, I would like to explore a redesign of these browsing pages. I think making the titles bigger would be a good start and maybe changing the font face to georgia as many headers throughout the site are.

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Posted: Aug 4, 2008 2:03 pm

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Ah! I meant the first link. You did exactly what I had hoped.  Looks great and it does make the decription pop a little better.  Thanks a lot!!

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