Seven Feudal Fairy Tales Chapter 1 Reviews

This is really, really interesting! A great start, and the plot intrigues me...

There are a few little mistakes, nothing that I can't get by. I do, however, wish it was more up-to-date, since it's upposed to have been 2 years. But that's ok, I know not everyone is up to date on Inuyasha, and you probably planned this a while ago!

All in all, a fabulous start! I can't wait to read more, so I'm gonna get over to Chapter 2. :o)

Thank you I haven't written much before honestly. Persuasive essays really. So this is for the most part my first foray in creative writing.

I actually chose to do it in this time frame. Things get very complicated in the later chapters of Inu-Yasha and I wanted to place it during a comparative lull in the canon story.

I also wanted to write it so that it fits in with the main story. I always hate it when I read something that purports the future, such as the final battle with Naraku and has elements that are changed as the manga goes in a different direction. Like Kikyou's death or Sesshoumaru's mom being alive. I'm not sure if that makes any sense, but it's how I feel

Oh, ok! I understand. Well sure, everyone has their likes and dislikes. It doesn't - by any means - take away from the story. I guess it's just the fangirl in me that prefers Sesshoumaru with 2 arms and Bakusaiga. XD

Ah, those first fanfics are always great. You'll see - once you're almost done with this you'll either hate it and swear them off, or you'll love them and start a new one. I, unfortunately, scewed myself that way. When I was almost done with one, I started another. And I only got a few chapters in before starting yet another. My advice to you is to stick with one at a time, unless you have a LOT of spare time on your hands... T-T I'm so anxious to keep my story going that I'm killing myself... lol I just want to get to the good parts.

Now they can't get anything done in the story until he shows up with the Bakusaiga in one hand and the Tenseiga in the other. He's a one taiyoukai army. All hail the fluff!

Well, I'm trying to keep it going. I really want to do my Arabian Nights idea that I got a few weeks ago, with him as the king and Kagome telling the stories to essentially keep her head. If only, just to tell the story of Aladdin with Miroku filling in the main part.

I'm finishing this story first though, because it's a lot of fun honestly and there is some pretty serious things coming up in the later stories. Although the humor will always be there

Oh, yes. Definately bow to the fluff...

That sounds interesting! Miroku actually looks disconcertingly like Alladdin, and Sango like Jasmine... o_O

You see how the writing bug gets you?! LOL It's really hard for me, because I have resolved to making each chapter at least 10,000 words, or at least close enough. It takes a good 10+ hours to write that, especially if I'm distracted. But luckily I haven't caught the writers' block...

Yeah, I know how it is. Sometimes I'll finish a chapter and just keep going, although I know I need to get going on a different story, lol.

Ugh... I go for 2,500 words... more or less. It takes me 6-8 hours just to do that. I'm slow and I tend to wander off to chase shiny things. Very bad.

Inu-Yasha is gonna be the genie who's been stuck in the lamp for 50 years... It's gonna be hilarious.

I was thinking about writing a one-shot lemon though, just to try out my citrusy skills before I get to it in Seven Feudal.

I wish I could only do that much. But my readers love long chapters, and I enjoy writing long chapters. And I know what you mean. If it's not the husband it's the dog or cats. Always something.

XD A genie Inuyasha??? LOL

The oneshot lemon is a GREAT idea. If you haven't written them before, I can tell you - it WILL help. In my first fanfic, Always, I dove into the lemon chapter headfirst without ever having written one before. Now I look back at it like, UGH! I could've done much better... -.-

I've got an idea for one. Maybe I'll do it over Thanksgiving when I have a lot of time to spend on it. Lemon writing sounds like so much fun though I'm looking forward to it

Oh BOY is it fun. I've been getting carried away with citrusy parts in my AU fic... I have to check my reins. And since oneshots don't really require much backstory and don't need a plot, they are PERFECT for limey practice. I plan on doing a SessKag lemon oneshot for my challenge, but have to concentrate on the chapter I'm working on first.

I want to do mine now... Hmm, maybe I will

yay you posted it here. i've read the first chapter. so far its interesting. i hope there's some romance involved ^.^

Of course, there is But not for a while... For now, they must annoy each other

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Oh wow this is just stunning! I love how you have taking those stories and made them your own. I can't wait to see what happens next. I also love how you are taking your time with the love interest between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. A lot of times the authors just make them fall in love by the 2nd chapter. Keep it up!!

I'm glad that you appreciate the story I'm trying to create and don't see it as simply another vehicle to put Sesshoumaru and Kagome together. I also appreciate the that you value the gradual growth the characters share with each other. There are a fair number of readers who are disappointed every chapter that passes where they aren't making lovey dovey eyes at each other or going at it like a couple of bunnies.

Your welcome^_^ I for one am not disappointed about you taking your time on their love interest. I think it builds who they are and what they will become. It also makes the story more climatic. It almost like the readers want to read the end first lol. Anyways you are doing an awesome job!