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Awww this is so sad Sad Still very good. Can't wait for more Grin

"...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!"

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you are good! i like them all so far!!

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Hey Lunarbabe. This is quite heartbreaking. Sounds like you been through losing someone who you thought was very special.

You're never too old to have a happy childhood.

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I know who that was about. He's such a prat. Hug I can't beliave he said it was stupid. Next time I see him... Mad Don't worry. I liked it. It was really touching. Embarrassed Anyways, it was written pretty well but I know you can do better. Yes

There are some things in life better left untouched, such as graves, crime scene evidence, cursed gold, and other people's girlfriends.

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