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I absolutely love this Fic. Your writing style is an inspiration to me as i write my own. Please don't stop writing. I can't wait for the next chapter! Dance I hope Sesshy-kun does the silly naked dance with Shiro-kun.

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Oh wow this is just stunning! I love how you have taking those stories and made them your own. I can't wait to see what happens next. I also love how you are taking your time with the love interest between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. A lot of times the authors just make them fall in love by the 2nd chapter. Keep it up!!

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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

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Your story has been nominated in the Best AU/AR category.

Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here:
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Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight).

Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!


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yay you posted it here. i've read the first chapter. so far its interesting. i hope there's some romance involved ^.^

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This is really, really interesting! A great start, and the plot intrigues me...

There are a few little mistakes, nothing that I can't get by. I do, however, wish it was more up-to-date, since it's upposed to have been 2 years. But that's ok, I know not everyone is up to date on Inuyasha, and you probably planned this a while ago!

All in all, a fabulous start! I can't wait to read more, so I'm gonna get over to Chapter 2. :o)

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 p.s. My Red Curtain stuff is better.  ;o)

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