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After reading this twice I must say that I greatly enjoyed your writing. My only complaint was that there was not enough of it. I want more!

The feel and mood of this short was outstanding and it piques your interest within the first 4 sentences. Very well done. I enjoyed it so much that I may just ask you if I could give drawing Amos a try sometime in the near future. So expect a an e-mail from me soon.

By the way, thanks for letting me know that you posted this, I would of hated to have missed it.

I don't sleep. I despise those little slices of death.

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