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On My Holiday To Durban
 by PigletLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Apr 5, 2006 2:49 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 0 Review(s)Updated on Apr 5, 2006 2:49 amI live in Durban, South Africa and this city has a pretty high crime rate and the authorities aren't too competent. This light-hearted poem sums it up for me. |
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Darknessby AmericanRejectLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Apr 4, 2006 8:06 pm / 1 Chapter(s) / 1 Review(s)Updated on Apr 4, 2006 8:06 pmA Poem I wrote about everything in my life... |
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Beautiful...
 by arkillianLibraries: Angst, One Shots, Original Fiction, Philosophical, RomancePublished on Mar 27, 2006 2:42 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 7 Review(s)Updated on Mar 27, 2006 2:42 amThis story is one I've been thinking about for a while- Beauty, and its relativity at school. Julia is interupted in the girl's toilets by some 'prettier' girls and its talked into a make over. Umm- want some advice on this story. I really doesn't flow, and I can't get it right. Thoughts? |
A Man of Darkness
 by DollmakerLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Mar 20, 2006 7:29 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 7 Review(s)Updated on Mar 20, 2006 7:29 amWell...believe it or not, this poem is based on a joke. I used to think my algebra teacher was trying to brainwash his students, and everyone thought I was crazy. And...well, I wrote a poem about it. So, in a way, it's dedicated to my Algebra 1 teacher, Mr. Tedesco. ^.^;; |
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Hades's Story
by DollmakerLibraries: Adventure, Alternate Universe, Fantasy, Original Fiction, RomancePublished on Mar 20, 2006 7:00 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 5 Review(s)Updated on Mar 20, 2006 7:00 amThis story is about Hades and his struggles to win Persephone's heart. There may be mature content in the future, but for now, it's safe. |
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the Cyborg
 by BrethesenLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Mar 18, 2006 9:09 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 0 Review(s)Updated on Mar 18, 2006 9:09 amHm, i have just watched Xenosaga the Animation and i got the idea of cyborg from there, the rest is my own... |
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Adoption Center
by DollmakerLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Mar 17, 2006 6:57 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 20 Review(s)Updated on Mar 17, 2006 6:57 amThis was the first poem I ever wrote. I wrote this to enter in a Neopets (I'm a member, yes) poetry contest. I lost, but everyone I know was so moved by the poem that I decided to keep it and direct it to Adoption Centers in general, and not just the Neopets one. :) Hope you like! |
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The girl with the rat
by DollmakerLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Mar 17, 2006 6:53 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 8 Review(s)Updated on Mar 17, 2006 6:53 amAs is turns out, the little rat was really a gerbil. Before the girl (I believe her name is Amanda) left the park, she walked over to me and we broke out in a light conversation. I had met her before, and she told me that she was a practitioner of witchcraft, and she and her friend, Jessica, had tried turning themselves into cats, or, that’s what they told me. They also seemed very interested in the tarot deck I had brought with me the day I first met them. I tried to incorporate the whole story into my poem, and I think I did a halfway decent job. This author’s note is simply to tie up loose ends. And no, the gerbil did not think it was a cat, the girl did. |
