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Young Soldier
 by DollmakerLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Mar 17, 2006 6:44 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 8 Review(s)Updated on Mar 17, 2006 6:44 amThis is for all the fighting soldiers at Iraq. |
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The Boy
by DollmakerLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Mar 16, 2006 7:45 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 4 Review(s)Updated on Mar 16, 2006 7:45 amThis poem...I kinda feel bad writing about, because I ripped off the idea from some other poem I had read in a book with a whole bunch of Teen Poetry. I didn't plagerize! Don't get me wrong, I just kinda...stole the general idea of the poem and made it my own. :( I hope no one hates me for it. You'll probably hate me for having a longer summary than the poem itself is, though. o.O |
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Conflicted
by DollmakerLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Mar 14, 2006 7:44 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 7 Review(s)Updated on Mar 14, 2006 7:44 amAnother poem. I had been talking to a friend who had been having some 'love troubles' and I was inspired to write this poem. I was starting to show feelings of my own for someone, too. But I'm over that now. I think...O.o; |
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Dolls Cry Too
by DollmakerLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Mar 14, 2006 7:38 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 1 Review(s)Updated on Mar 14, 2006 7:38 amThis is a poem I came up with when my cousin (the one who reffered me here in the first place) told me about a story idea, which I plan to do fanart for, even though it's not published. Anyway, the series is about a woman titled, The Dollmaker (guess where got my name?) and she takes human bodies and makes them into dolls. Then she sells them to people. It's kind of like Petshop of Horrors. ^.^ |
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Thoughts
 by BrethesenLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Mar 5, 2006 11:09 am / 1 Chapter(s) / 1 Review(s)Updated on Mar 5, 2006 11:09 amHm, while dwelling in self-hate and loathing, i wrote this poem. Funny. I believed that i can't learn nothing new from poetry... |
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The Simple Days
 by 4ChristLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Feb 26, 2006 10:28 pm / 1 Chapter(s) / 2 Review(s)Updated on Feb 26, 2006 10:28 pmMy sister and I were talking, remembering the "old days" of when we were younger. Things seemed so much simpler then. So I wrote this out of inspiration. Yay! ^_^ |
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Numb
by 4ChristLibraries: Drabbles, Blurbs, Free Writes, General, Original FictionPublished on Feb 26, 2006 10:13 pm / 1 Chapter(s) / 1 Review(s)Updated on Feb 26, 2006 10:13 pmI wrote this one night about 2 months ago. I remember the emotions of that night, and none were good. I didn't have depression, depression had me... |
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The other side of me
by 4ChristLibraries: Poetry and Song LyricsPublished on Feb 26, 2006 2:53 pm / 1 Chapter(s) / 1 Review(s)Updated on Feb 26, 2006 2:53 pmFor so long I was suffering in silence, but I finally decided to stop hidding and admit to my pain. |
