Princess WIP 2

The princess is fine. The horse is off. ^^; His head is a bit too small for the body, you have what looks like a draft horse or a horse a knight would ride. The nose is also wrong, horses have a more rounded shape to their nose, you'd see their nostrils... dang, it's easier for me to show you than tell you. ^^; the cheek is big and round, almost like a circle,and you would see a definite chin. There's also some chording in the face that goes between the cheek and mouth. You have the chording in the neck, that's good, the other side of the neck,should arc back and the chest should be higher. The legs are way too short and thin for this type of horse. The left hind leg looks good in terms of the basic shape. It just needs to be thicker. The right hind leg at that angle would look similar to the left. Hooves would also be much bigger. You're drawing a draft horse, not a sleek Arabian. And lastly that horse would have a bigger rump. Horse don't care if their butts are big! *winks*

Hello! I thought I would be first to give you a crit.!

Just to get this out of the way, I am crap when it comes to drawing people, so anything that would need to be done with the princess is beyond my skill to crit. She honestly looks fine to me!
I do have a bit of skill with horses, though I do typically draw in an anime style.

Ok, enough about me. Let's start with the ear. Your horses ear seems a bit small and angled, almost too sharp, as is the head. The position you put it in would make the head larger, because it is coming at us (Though it is turned away, which makes things slightly more difficult.) To fix this, you can try thinning out the neck (which seems a bit wide)or you can make the brow of the horse bigger and extend the snout out.
I love the mane and tail on your horse; much better than any hair I have ever done. Mine typically comes out as a bloby thing on the horse. ^^"
The shoulders are usually a bit more prominent, but that really depends on the breed, age and style. I can see some marks you have for muscle, maybe when you color it they will be more prominent.
The legs seem a bit spindly and short, more like a pony. Once again, the hair on the legs is superb, but the hooves seem slightly rounded and small, or maybe I do mine too big. Which I know I do. I like the raised leg, you did a great job on it!
Well, I gotta get to class, but I hope I have been of assisstance to you, and I can't wait to see the finished project!
^.~