Pondering the Future

Posted Jun 10, 2007, 4:01:22 AM UTC

"Nehra stared out over the lush scape of his newly claimed domain and pondered the future of his rule as king of the Gorgon tribes of Shaadiv"

This is very rough.  I haven't decided on an expression and I need to work on his pose - not to mention that pesky railing!!! *kills stupid railing* Did I mention I hate drawing hands and feet!

I'm looking for suggestions on the railing style and or background.  A wall? A door? Any anatomy crits are welcome.  Give examples, if you have them, please.

P.S.  Anybody else wanna do some laundry on those washboard abs? :lol:

 

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  • Apr 23, 2008, 9:18:14 PM UTC
    This one intrigues me the most of your gallery so far. I really like the angle and thoughtful mood of the pose, though I do not quite understand the blindfold. Or maybe his eyes just aren't on there yet?

    The curve of the action line is very sleek and sexy, and fits with what I'm getting is meant to be a sensual character. The anatomy seems pretty good, as well.

    For a background, maybe a sort of arch leading into a vague chamber? Nothing detailed beyond the arch. Just showing that there's a portal into *somewhere* behind him should be plenty.
    • Apr 24, 2008, 9:41:24 AM UTC
      Oh! Heh....I haven't figured out an expression so my sketch lines are still there. It does kinda look like a blind fold. That's a great idea for the background. And yes...very sensual character. I'm delighted you picked that up.
      • Apr 24, 2008, 10:43:46 AM UTC
        I think you're onto something there with the shape of the mouth! If you make a sort of distant expression, like he's staring off at something behind and to the side of the viewer, it'll be perfect! Basically, looking straight in the direction the face is pointed. Does that make sense? @_@
  • Jun 10, 2007, 10:10:35 AM UTC
    Gah, so sexy. >.> Those abs would make anyone wanna do laundry ^_^" I think from the sketched in facial features, that a blankish/stoic expression would work..that or a small smile or something. But yeahhhh, sexy sexy man..demon..guy thing. Love the ears too!
    • Jun 10, 2007, 10:57:33 AM UTC
      Yes...a stoic expression would be nice. Nehra is always grinning at something, but this would be a good peek at his serious side.

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