This picture was found on an internet site [somewhere] and is not my original work.
This is my very first drawing I've done with only pen! I feel so proud. I have been so busy, it's been hard to find the time to really sit down and draw. Hope you like!
Constructive Critique requested. See Tips.
The only suggestion I'd have is to vary the line quality a bit. Right now it looks rather flat, since they've all got the same weight to them. If you gave it a nice border, or thickened the lines of the bricks as they came closer, you could really add depth to the piece.
yeah, when i had finished, i noticed that the lines were all reather... bleh.
and the shadows aren't as smooth as I would like either... but hey, still not horrible for a first lol
thanks for the comment
you made my day.
so ill prolly redo it. and ink won't smear like pencil lead, so ill give ink a try again
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I like how you've shaded the bricks. The boxes could be a bit straighter, as that helps the rest of the drawing's form, but that also comes with more practice, etc. I think it looks good.
but its okay. it's still pretty to me
thank you for the kind review.
much appreciated
YAY!
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appreciate the comment :D